Maybe I'm some sort of perverted cartoon-sexual.

I might not use capital letters. But I would definitely use an apostrophe…and probably a period. I’m a huge fan of punctuation.

Can't you just like a girl who likes you back?

He'd stopped trying to bring her back.

Park stood up when she got to their row, and as soon as she sat down, he took her hand and kissed it. It happened so fast, she didn't have time to die of ecstasy or embarrassment.

He made her feel like more than the sum of her parts.