Strive not to be a success, but rather to be of value.

Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of value.

Try not to become a man of success. Rather become a man of value.

Try not to become a man of success, but a man of value.

If A equal success, then the formula is A equals X plus Y and Z, with X being work, Y play, and Z keeping your mouth shut.

Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value.