You missed a line and there was nothing engaging about your delivery.

This is probably the best you've ever done. You've improvised and are a joy to watch frame after frame.

I need you to work on being comfortable in your skin.

She looks like a frightened bird.

Contrary to what Kafka does, I always like to refer all of my fictions to the level of reality, He, on the other hand, leaves them at an imaginary level.

I think he's been playing absolutely unreal. He's been hitting singles, doubles, triples, home runs. He's been stealing bases. He's been making plays all over the field.